Respuesta :

somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right

Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma

Second sentence Thoughts rushed  "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through

elp14

"plain" needs to be "plane".

"threw" needs to be "through".

"begin" needs to be "began".

"as" needs to be "As".

"walk" needs to be "walked". There needs to be a , after "walked".

"write" needs to be "right".

"their" needs to be "there".

"was" needs to be "Was".

"hear" needs to be "heard". There needs to be a ? after "heard".

"surely" needs to be "Surely".

There needs to be a . after "not".

"cooksville" needs to be "Cooksville".

There needs to be a , after "Nevertheless".

"cood" needs to be "could".

Also, there might need to be "sound" after "rustling".


That's all I could find, but there might be more...