Respuesta :
somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right
Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma
Second sentence Thoughts rushed "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through
"plain" needs to be "plane".
"threw" needs to be "through".
"begin" needs to be "began".
"as" needs to be "As".
"walk" needs to be "walked". There needs to be a , after "walked".
"write" needs to be "right".
"their" needs to be "there".
"was" needs to be "Was".
"hear" needs to be "heard". There needs to be a ? after "heard".
"surely" needs to be "Surely".
There needs to be a . after "not".
"cooksville" needs to be "Cooksville".
There needs to be a , after "Nevertheless".
"cood" needs to be "could".
Also, there might need to be "sound" after "rustling".
That's all I could find, but there might be more...