Argumentative essays are a style of writing, or genre, that seeks to expose a debatable statement and prove or disprove it through the gathering of proving data and research. This type of writing requires a writer to spend a lot of time on research, on creating and establishing claims and counterclaims and adding the data collected in favor and against the claim the writer is trying to establish as a truth. One of the main issues of an argumentative essay is the way that collected data and research are tied together through links and connectors to the main statement, or the claim. In this particular case, Reiko, the writer of this essay, initiates her paragraph by mentioning her claim, which is that eating fruits and veggies is a good idea and follows it with the proving data. However, although both mention fruits and vegetables within the information, it would seem that they talk about the same thing, but not how they are linked, or how the study proves that her statement is correct. Which is why the correct answer is B, she needs to establish a connection to her claim so that people understand how the research acquired proves her point.
