Excerpt from Norse Mythology Part A
Kate McConnaughey

PLEASE HELP ME!!

(3)In his hand he carried a wonderful hammer which always had come back to his hand when he threw it.
How can sentence (3) be written to eliminate wordiness and redundancy without changing its original meaning?
A) The sentence is fine as is.
B) In his hand he carried a wonderful hammer.
C) He carried a hammer that returned to him when he threw it.
D) In his hand he carried a wonderful hammer that always returned.

Respuesta :

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Answer:

C) He carried a hammer that returned to him when he threw it.

Explanation:

It is the only option that keeps all the essential elements of the sentence, without changing its meaning, but cuts out enough words to make it shorter and less redundant.

The answer is C !!!!!