I just want some feedback, thanks!

Here is my rough draft

National landmarks are a part of our nations history. Landmarks commonly represent something that happened in the past, including wars and big events. Using public money to maintain these landmarks, is something that would be beneficial. If we do use public money to maintain them, then more generations will be able to experience them. 

             When landmarks deteriorate, current and future generations are no longer able to see the landmarks. An example of these landmarks deteriorating, is the Statue of Liberty. In 1875 when the statue of liberty was built it had the color of copper. However, due to the copper reacting to the sun, the color has changed to the green that it is today. Because of its color becoming green, current and future generations are unable to see the original copper color.

             National Landmarks also give students an opportunity to learn more about our nation's history. Visiting National landmarks also gives students an educational experience outside of their classrooms. This can give students a better understanding of our past as a nation. It also gives teachers new teaching opportunities. I would have many things to write about, because I'm from a navy family, and have been to a lot of different places.

              In conclusion, we should maintain, and preserve our national landmarks. They are part of our nation's history. They also give students a better learning experience and teachers better teaching opportunities. These are all reasons why we should use public money to maintain landmarks.