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Read the paragraph. Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. We planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. We decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route. Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph? sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4

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Answer:

A. sentence 1

Explanation:

I just took the test on edg. and it was correct :)

As per the given paragraph, the sentence that requires to be rewritten in order to enhance the clarity would be:

A). Sentence 1

  • 'Clarity' is a very significant aspect of writing to ensure an effective understanding of the meaning and concept among the readers.
  • In the given paragraph, the first sentence because it inaptly uses the synonym 'troublesome and difficult' back to back and wrongly employs a comma(,) in between a simple sentence.
  • This clutters the intended idea and confuses the readers that would affect its understanding.
  • Thus, it needs a revision i.e. "Driving to the fair was a troublesome situation today."

Hence, option A is the correct answer.

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